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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-11-29 08:55 PM

Surrounded by faces
Surrounded by smiles
And reminders of who I used to be

Looking through a crowd
Of happy laughing people
All wrapped up in their snug little lives

The people turn and look
Seeing my exterior
But never bothering to see who hides beneath

I love these people with all my heart
And they love themselves
With all their heart

Searching for someone who never existed
Someone who appreciated me being me
But I know in the end perfect is impossible

I sit with these dolls
Laughing and gossiping
Submitting myself to their torture

I play with these dolls
Dressing them and doing their hair
So I have them exactly how I want

But then I look inside them
To see if their heart holds a place for me
And I am rudely awakened

I sit with these dolls
And Wonder
Is it me who is the wierd one
Or do I just not fit in?

(Thanks to all those who helped me write this... CKVR, KJE, LWD, and hopefully AVT will read this... thank you with all my heart you guys. you rock my world)

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-11-29 09:06 PM

I can see you tooo!!!!!!
No your not the only weird one! Look at me, girl! I'm crazy. Sarah says I'm stupid, grrr. Scott agrees. Like chocolates, the best part is in the middle, so eat your outershell away, and we get to see the gooey caramel. This is making Sarah hungry, haha.
Good poem, don't leave such long pauses between your posting, I always love reading these!
Too much punctuation, ah well. Talk to you, like in a few mins.

Hollow.
Courtney.

P.S. From Sarah....
heheheheeh hello sophiepophie! im sera and im writing to u now did u know that were both so cool that i like doing things with my cat heheh but not rudely that wud make me so different aye? u and me we had an oppurtunity cos were rexy buggas heheehehe write bak
shallow
sera

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-11-29 10:12 PM

aw shucks. im glad i helped you... but in wat way? ha it was a great poem, i love yours.
maybe the pauses between posts are good making them so much better when u do post them!

ha ha just saw abby and gina make a fool of themselves in the year 9 aerobics competition. we were shouting the whole time GO NINA! GO ABOY! NOW can u see who is weird? ME

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

3 posted 2004-11-30 12:54 PM

god, i've got to go back to the "underworld"! i miss it, aye, i tell ya i do, mates.
and d_w, this was perfect. i'm definitely in tue with you at this moment. oy!

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2004-12-12 07:49 PM

"Searching for someone who never existed
Someone who appreciated me being me
But I know in the end perfect is impossible"

Though impossible, it is never fruitless to strive for an ideal.

I appreciate you writing from the heart and soul of you.

Thanks,

CB 8)

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

5 posted 2004-12-13 10:18 PM

This piece reminded me of my piece,Death of a Love so Strong. Thank you very much. I reposted it for you. Great piece and nice help for everyone that helped.

I would like to keep this piece if it's alright.

Love,
Ladycat

"Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

6 posted 2005-01-02 04:19 PM

I missed this one, but i was scrolling back down through the list, and @##$&#%(^$&()(@^&*$ omg SOPH, that was so freakin' amazing... ...*sigh* i loved it so much. I'm going to be quiet now, so as to not ruin the brilliance of the poem.

The people turn and look
Seeing my exterior
But never bothering to see who hides beneath

I love these people with all my heart
And they love themselves
With all their heart

my favourite parts ^

Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it.

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