Dark Poetry #4 |
The guilty blamecaster |
vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
The intrepid depths of this engulfing pool of hate spurned by the most envious of all emotion, has riddled the girl's once bright and full body, now reducing her to a mere empty shell held together by her own will to spite the world and the people she blames for her own self destructive, jealous nature. Tis not their fault, blame caster, Tis only your own. *i dunno who this is about, it just came to me one day during like french class or something, cuz i couldn't be bothered listening.* "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I think I'm a blame caster! Or maybe the complete opposite. It's not very nice in the extremes, it's hard. Neutral, average, normal are stupid words because nobody is. Not like your others, it is short and sweet. It's good! Hollow. CK. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
i loved it personaly. wonderful. so damn good and true gud work your the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
nice maybe not your best but damn good darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I missed this one along time ago or whenever it was written, but I just saw it. Its a pretty good write and it sounds like it talks about the accuser himself. He only has friends because he lies. And he hates the friends he does have. Accusing who he will. Nice write. Pay more attention in French class. lol. -GIS let God ROAR,... in power... |
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