Dark Poetry #4 |
Pale Moon |
News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Pale moon daunts as it only "half shines" tonight. Its bottom tip not curving enough To contain the pain of all I've learned What light it even taunts me with is failed by dark clouds whisping away on the dance floor that is the sky between that daunty moon and me You'd think maybe it'd tip, that pale moon, just once at that one moment the clouds dart away, and at least soak me with whats left Then I could "half shiver" in return. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
wow. the sort of poetry that makes you stand still and simply sigh. i'd be honoured to possess even half the talent you have. you write such awesome poems. lots of love, Kurst "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Sometimes that little bit of comfort, yeah. Is so nice. =GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
nothing to say; it blew me away. i agree with the others. wish i had written this, 'cause i've sat there in the cold of night and cursed that pale moon. good job, news! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Ah, exceptional imagery. You have such a way with your words. This was great! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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