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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm ready to get what I deserve I know what I need I hesitate I hear your story and advise He said I can't I feel you all around me like I'm in a spiritual chatroom I feel your thoughts I love you all My stalemate can't stay, but will it This is where I'm coming from I have a destination And I'm bold by myself The hand that hands Has become slower So give it to me Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
bold indeed you are! but not by yourself. remember how i mistook the laughter when I revealed my feelings to a certain someone? and how the laughter was actually beautiful because that someone felt the same way all along but we were both stalemated????? fantastic poem, craig. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Funny that Eve should mention laughing, as I couldn't help but after my last post on his poem... and then seeing this. I even used the word "forced"... Craig, my truest of true friends that I've never met... you will indeed get what you deserve. It will be so much more than you can even comprehend in this chaotic world of valleys and mountain tops. You have shown your faithfulness time and time again. Even in the struggles of the darkest of your poems, a dim light always shines. "We're at our best when we're at our worst". I'd give credit if I knew who said that, but it's not important who said it, what is important is it is truth. As you struggle with the logic of the decision you have made to leave your shell and "go ye therefore", I have to tell you that there are many of us here that have done the exact same thing. We're still here. And all the better for having met such awe inspiring people on this site. It's much better than those matchmaker or meet each other sites. This one shows people as who they really are, and I owe these friends of mine my life. As Always, Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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