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Worthless Girl
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Worthless Girl |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Worthless girl, She sits, back turned to you. Hair hangs limp, Eyes closed, rocking back and forth, In the plastic seat which has became, Too homely, Too cozy, for her body to handle, She has to run. Her fingers fidget, Strip after strip of paper, Breath after breath of uselessness She can’t sit still. Worthless girl, She doesn’t care any more. For in the whole world, Nothing could maker her happy enough, To reach the stars, No one has that ladder That makes her feel special. That worthless girl, She’s a paranoid extravagance She thinks her whole world’s caving in on her, But she’s so wrong. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and not only was she wrong, but she just never realized that her friend standing right beside her was using all his strength to just hold that ladder up long enough for her to see his patience and willingness!! if it wasn't long enough, he'd build onto it for her. even sounds like a tribute to our friend vamp, as well as of course our favorite hollow one! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
My, my. You outdid yourself with this one, Courts... GREAT! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Thanks for the reply Eve. I wrote it for alot of people, an annoying girl, a pathetic girl (me lol!), a beautiful girl and two sad girls who have got to wake up. I could class myself under the sad category, but I'm different. So odd. Glad you enjoyed it. And also, thanks Purity, you replied as soon as I posted this so thanks! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow...amazing write...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
wow...so awesome. I agree..you really have outdone yourself here courtz! may a be a little nosey child and ask who's the annoying girl? beautiful girl? and the two sad girls? lots of love, Kurst "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Aye, but aren't we all a paranoid extravagance? Aye, but aren't we all "all blacks"? A phantastic poem, my New Zealand inscriber! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
COURTS WOW! oh i loved this so much.u r so amazing. ah. ah. ah! also may i be nosey and ask hu? Is that yet another New Zealander? News? oo... LOR your the only one keeping me alive |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Smile. . You are the beautiful one.Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow. This poem really hits a sore spot with me. I can relate to it so well. The descriptions were amazing, as well as the emotions evoked. Thanks for sharing, this is going in my library. But Im comforted |
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