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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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This mid of night 'neath spectral sky she stands her guard with watchful eye in silent poise just out of reach protecting from the shadows' feed this dank and dreary night in weep, her darkness draws me closer still yet slight of hiss in muted cry is warning of "don't enter here" admonishment of "leave me be" in eremitic circle cast with quarters called in circumspect of circular where none shall pass... She guards the night in watchful keep lest demons dare invade my sleep ~Vicky L. Raynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-25-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
quite amazing, friend..  |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
It may be true you see those who are there with the good, there it rains on both in a different place so close not understood for not all to see. Well you have someone who looks over you above all. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The "leave me be" really stuck out in this write for me. There are times it's better to just part ways, because all it does is just open the wounds over, and, over again. Sometimes it works out that way. It's sad, but true as Metallica says, and they are soooooooooo right!!!!!!! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky At least you're getting some sleep? Enjoyed this look into your night!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, Vicky, I don't believe I've read "Dark" by you in the past. A fantastic write m'dear... enjoyed. Maree  fate is not just |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
You've achieved a perfectly rhythmical piece. Nice job! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide. Well, well, miss vicky. A blessed be from me to thee!  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, I've read it three times over, and it gets better every time... *hugs* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent writing vicky |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The flow and style is remarkable. I enjoyed reading. Thanks, coyote |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Meghan...thanks much, my friend. Merlynh...yes...I believe that I do. Thank you so much. Shara...I'm glad you got something from this. Thank you. Martie...unfortunatly, not much sleep on this particular night... but thank you for the thought, my friend. Love you, I do... Maree...I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you, sweets... Insomniac Cat...thank you much. Glad you enjoyed. Karen...smiling wide right back at you...and a blessed be from me back to you...smile. Love you much, lady...  Rhonda...what?...only 3 reads? LOL. Thank you, YOU. I love ya, ya know... Raph...thank you much, my friend. coyote...so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you. Thanks so much, everyone.,, You're all so good to me! Love and hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 12:37 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"All hope abandon, ye who enter here!" Nice Vic! (Dark too!) Ed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh Vicky . . . I adore this reminded me of the moon keeping watch silence all around the slightest nudge startling jarring every living nerve wide- eyed wonderment what was that? ooooh . . . the dark she does not lie she knows my fate my lies deep down inside Beautiful writing, as always nice to see you here  lol xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well penned thoughts,,, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I gave this one more than one read my friend... I don't know if I'm warped enough to believe this one is not so "dark", (lol) or if it perhaps is just written well enough to fool me... enjoyed.. hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Do you mind if i borrow her? I've a few demons I'd like to keep at bay right now. |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
I keep coming back to this over ad over. Wonderful writing! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A guardian angel, no doubt... This is a good'n, Vicky... |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Liked the flow and it's a pleasent read  Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very good write, i did enjoy this very much, really have not seen you too much iin dark but i am glad you are here now! "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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