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It's Over
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It's Over |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Now I know the answer, it's over. You're done with me Just a tiresome buss, an irritating fly Tapping your shoulder Shock passes over your face when you see me. "What is she doing here?" I see your mind ask I thought she was gone, but now she's back How I longed for your friendship Endless discussions on this and that I thought that there may have been a chance But was sadly mistaken Why'd you do this to me? Don't you realise the pain you put me through? How can you be so fickle? Leaving me out on the road While you drive alone to the sunset Tears tumbling, as my hearts starts breaking What can I do without you? You're the light in my darkness The world was a dizzying blue, But it came clear, as you moved near. NOw this is nothing and I truly fear The next time I see you face, But your face does not see mine. *written AGES ago* "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I don't know if you can take whatever I have to say. It is easier to pretend. Nice poem. -GIS |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"it's never too late... it's never too late... to forgive and forget; tell me that it isn't over... tell me that it isn't over... i'll never hold you again." i always say to my soulmate, whether they know they are or not that "i can wait forever, if you say you'll be there too" love vamp! mp i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Ending killed me, sigh. Great poem, glad you can post everything here. Must go, must go... Hollow. CK. (Crack up, not Calvin Klein guys!) I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
If a fly ever taps me on the shoulder It better have golden wings. You are a mystery, Vampiana, my dearest. Are these insights into biography? Or insightful outlooks on others? Either way, you speak from the depths, And I love the realism. So, speak on. Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Basically all my poems are related to me. If they aren't I normally state it. lol Thanks everyone for the replies! you all rock! Lots of love, Kurst "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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