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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Everything's wrong, nothing's right. If right exists, I've tried it and failed I wish for my light bulb Each and every day But I never get a break stuck in a permanent powercut. Swallowed by a wave of worthlessness Struck dumb by my lack of creativity Pray for a talent, but do not receive Crying never helps, only increases the pain. Whoever said that everyone has a talent is a liar, a deceiver. Whoever said that everyone is special is a liar, a deceiver. Whoever said that everyone is beautiful is a liar, a deceiver. Did they not realise all it took was me... To destroy their idea. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Hey that whole thing was an oxymoron! Did you realize this?? For in writing it, you caused it to prove what it says to be disproved... How cool is that?  Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
how cool WAS that? i agree awesome dude u r so sooooooooooo good. believe ME, those smart ass chicks could NEVER EVER write better than you. they would write boring stuff about flowers and butterflies. or maybe maths... LOR your the only one keeping me alive |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I feel like this too. No talent I mean. If I do anything, they are like, "No Courtney" or if I try, they constantly critiscise till I'm mute and numb and close to getting a peptic ulcer. Then they ask what's wrong. But, don't you realise? THIS IS YOUR TALENT Mine too I hope, don't ruin my slef-esteem and tell me it's not. I don't think anything could save me then. THIS IS YOUR TALENT! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thats the cool thing about poetry. When you write it you're like "ahh, this sux." Then when you learn to look at it from a third person point of view sometimes you look and go, "wow, I wrote that? I don't even remember it." lol. Its like how many times can you stab the ground before you realise you have a hole? Nice write. and I meant that. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Now I'm starting to see what EG, News and Green mean about the poetic merits of the responses to these great poems! "How many times do you have to stab the ground before you realize you have a hole?"... That was great! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
and this is what makes vampiana a staplepoint for being one of the greats in passions in poetry. whether this is first person, or third person omnicient, it is an incredible work of art. if she can get the he into the art of her life...then her life will be as HEartful as her poems. i'm loving it... you're an inspitation to me, vampiana. it's all good. time will show. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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