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Dark Poetry #4

Used (Malicious love)

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-01-21 07:20 AM

broken battered and bruised
now I see how I am used
do what you must to appease you hate
I love you and am ready to accept my fate

If my death will please you, kill me
If my tears calm you, make them flow
If my bruises make you smile, hit me
If you want to be alone, make me go

But I beg of you, take me into your embrace,
Even just once, please just show me a trace
Of the love that once was…
The love that was us…

I love you and always will no matter what
Even when you scream to keep my mouth shut
For I am yours my love and yours alone
And will always call your malicious arms home

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

1 posted 2008-01-25 11:37 PM

Wow, That reminds of a story someone wrote. Very good, I love your work.

Dark,
Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you

mged
Junior Member

since 2007-03-29

Posts 39
ND

2 posted 2008-01-30 01:43 PM

this is very well its hard to put into words
so all i can say is this is good i liked it
keep at it

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2008-02-02 01:38 PM

The writting was amazing, but i the abuse of love is chilling, and well i would not be able to. All in all i liked your work.

Thank you, Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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