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Dark Poetry #4

A Time to Love

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-11-08 11:08 AM

Her name
whispers
through
angels'
wings
As morning
breaks through
the dream
I am
on my knees
I pray
to glimpse
her face
smiling
she never
disappoints me
she rises
she shines &
I am bathed
in the light
of her silence.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-11-08 11:20 AM

And you, ~K~, just vicariously bathed my soul with this poem. It takes me many (sometimes very many) lines to say whay you say in so few perfectly beautiful words.
Once again, you inspire and enlighten!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-11-08 09:34 PM

this is such a stark contrast to "A Time to Kill"....but often the passion that sparks anger is the same passion that sparks Love.

and here, seems so serene, picturesque....

if the same person inpired both poems that is understandable....

but this hidden here in the dark forum leaves me to believe someone was left unrequited?

you are intriguing

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

3 posted 2004-11-11 02:38 AM

oh my god, this was perfect.
for those who need to, replace she with he.
universal love.
universal, period.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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