Dark Poetry #4 |
Get away from him |
vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
I dispise you. How dare you flaunt your happiness in front of me. Going on about this and that When you know how Jealous It makes me. I hate how pretty you are. I hate how I know You'll get him. I want to vomit when I see, His beautiful Arms wrapped around Your shoulders. DON'T TOUCH HER! I want to scream, but he doesn't know me I just admire him from afar, And pretend to you Like I'm over him. Like I don't love him Just as much as you. And there you are Flaunting your happiness, The pictures of him With his arm around your shoulder, You looking just as pretty and radiant as ever. I dispise you And I dispise me For being so petty. But I don't care, Just get away from him. Why must you want him, Making me feel even more broken inside. Just a pathetic nothingness, Sitting at home, watching dumb movies. While you're out there, Dirtying him with your touch. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
Oh kurt........ ouch. oh my. you expressed that so painfully, and oh god it makes it easier to understand. that is one of the worst feelings ever. and admitting to jealousy doesnt make u less jealous! nor does denying it..... god i loved it. hu ever this pretty girl is, in the end of the day, shes just that pretty face, and ur way more. But also in the end of the day, u r prettier just unusual! shes prob typical looking chick.... he'll mvoe on and see what hes been missing. LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
shes not typical pretty..shes that striking model pretty. i don't want to be unusual. no one likes stupid "unusual" people. thanks for the reply anyway "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Fluck (cue taken from you lor). Sorry I didn't cast my eyes over this sooner. I feel pathetic, but I guess you feel sort of similar. I feel the same, in a different sort of way (read reply to my poem "Nobody Likes You, Friend" I hate feeling jealous. But I do. Well written, felt the emotion. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
good work everyone wants what they cant have right? nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"she-cat stalking on the wild side..." you go, girl! back arched, hairs raised, slant-eyed-pupils widened... scratch the 'ell outta her... this was bad to the bone. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Awesome Poem, I Know How It Is To "Want What You Cant Have",It Sucks ... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
well written kursed...... everyone is beautiful in their own way and it goes for you too.... just because she is model pretty desnt mean she has any personality.... yiou have loads of it... if you didnt you wouldnt be ab;le to write something like this... keep it coming.... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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