Dark Poetry #4 |
oh the irony |
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
its funny, how love goes you love someone to pieces love them so much it makes you cry makes you double over in pain makes you blind to everything around you and makes you want to die and then one day you can just leave it all behind because, you don't care anymore you just don't love anymore its funny, how love works you can give your all make yourself so vulnerable to everything and everyone because you love but for what? someone to ignore you? leave you in the shadows needing and wanting? because, they never cared its funny, how love is loved one way, so much but the other in return never even wanted to greet never wanted to hold their hand like the other had so many times in her dreams in my dreams living on forever in my dreams its funny, how YOU work string me along for so long making me think i've got the slightest chance slightest chance of love but then you leave me to find something else while you do too but its funny, who you choose someone you only just meet and leave the girl who loved you so much for so long to watch and wait for anything i don't care anymore i don't love you like i used to i have no feelings for you at all but oh the irony, i think when i see you with her she just comes along and everythings on and it just makes me think i was never worth it you never gave me a chance you never wanted me like you want her oh the irony when love turns around and bites you on the back put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
oh god..i loved it! and lor..remember..you are BEAUTIFUL inside and out, and any guy would be LUCKY to get a girl like you! Much Love, Kirsty "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Like your reply: I say COW! Lol. Oh so sad. Nearly cried, but restrained myself or Adam would call me a goth, evil boy. Lol. Ironic has been a word well used these past couple of days. Aye, aye, aye. Sad stuff. hollow. courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"you love someone to pieces love them so much it makes you cry" There's this saying that I love and it really goes with this. I'd like to share it with you: "No guy is worth your tears; and when you find one that is, he won't make you cry." Exactly like Kristy said, any guy would be lucky to have you! Great write...sad, but beautiful. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oh dear me so so so so sad great poem i agree with everything sed here, especially kurts's reply awesome stuff you wonderful one, you love and empathy 4eva darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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