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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
We're at our best when we're at our worst; Our attention span spans when it's us getting To display our weaknesses trampled upon. He said, She said, Did you hear about? God, that's so awful... I know, but at least... Funny, my editor hates the three dots thing. I say it's a poignant pause...(lol) a caesura. She says it's improper english. What do the English know about being proper? The most proper thing I ever heard an Englishman say Was "Let's drink 'til Ireland is in our backyard". There you go, dot dot dot, truth! We love to get intoxicated to unbridle the tongue. Love to get burned to ignite a fire of sympathy, For in sympathy, we radiate ourselves. I wrote a book today: 69 sheets of empty pages. My editor loved it for the lack of ...s. It'll be a best seller for the misfits, I assure. Now the denoument... "What's the clarity? Meaning in all this? Do you have a point that you can consisely make?" If I did, and if you did (dot dot dot) We wouldn't be a family of misfits explaining Our confusion of it all... ...right here. LOVE YA! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah pretty much. Getting into aggravating spots is actually kinda cool for poetry and art, but at the same time it sux to go through it... lol. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
...!  Enjoyed.  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Purity...I loved this poem. (and look, i love the three dots too. look at any poem/post i've made and you'll have seen them there...lol..)  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Now, that, Purity, was awesome. Loved it lol. Made me laugh too, I am a big fan of dots!!! I would do more than three, but microsoft word, tells me more than three doesn't work.  Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
that was soo cool...i to love the three dots...they are just so awesome...like your poem... lol... i'll stop...i'm overdoing it...ok...now i've really killed it... awesome poem! "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wow, It Was A Great Read, Nicely Done, and Everyone Likes Dots Every Now And Then... I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahaha point well taken, fine writing. |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Saw the title, and thought, hhmmm, do I want to take a chance? Glad I did, because this was awesome! I'm a dot-sot-dotter too, and I just...LOVED this! |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
awesome!... several themes within a theme churnning here until it makes you... liking it here, purity! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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