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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2004-10-21 02:45 PM

Eyelashes batter my salt stained skin,
lips on the back of my neck, remind
me of a time when we laughed together
when our bodies begged to be bound together-
and all there was were your eyes-
your sullen, brown eyes.

Your arms entwined with mine,
your filthy flesh presses against
my unclean thoughts. Your arms,
asking me to stay,

my body turns away telling
you to leave, wanting to keep
myself and not share it with you
as I have shared everything else.

Reminiscent sentiments burn through-
like your eyes as they burn holes
in the back of my neck, exposing
the question that you ask-

it’s in the answer that you crave.
With the worries that I gave
you, they told the worst of me.
It was hard for you to admit
you were wrong, with
the jealous indiscretions
that have now all but faded
into the background.

Silence, seeking sounds, demands
that this is worth only what it once was.

It’s times like these where silence means everything.

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2004-10-21 03:55 PM

Oh, Matt , this is amazing writing here.

'tis life so painful, *shaking head*

YOU have grown in your perception and your writing, m'friend.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2004-10-21 06:17 PM

hey this is cool, I know exactly what you're talking about throughout this whole thing because it happened to me. scary...it's great how you put this all together, I really like!!!!

- Bonnie

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2004-10-22 08:22 AM

The Only Word I Can Think Of After Reading The Poem Is........WOW

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-10-22 12:07 PM

im keep coming back to you for the grit, the realism....
again, you deliver perfectly

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-10-22 08:42 PM

I liked it. Its the way relationships go in one way or another. Eventual disgust with each other. For me anyways. lol

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

6 posted 2004-10-24 01:27 PM

taking back sunday lyrics!
haha.
I liked this line a lot:
"Silence, seeking sounds, demands
that this is worth only what it once was"
I feel your disgust. *shutter*

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2004-10-26 02:31 PM

Time to publish my man. To refine the refined. Very nice work eor. Very nice.

poe (wayne).

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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