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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-10-17 04:33 AM

waking up from this day-dream
looking around trying to figure out
what it meant to me
cause all i see is your face
all i know is your face
and as i reach out
to touch the perfection you bleed
your scarlet expression
carries back every insecurity
i ever had
as i wane my hand back into my pocket
hesitating my glance
back to the floor
your sighs confirm
your pity
and i want to scream
yell at you
shut up
stop it
dont turn me away
i hate you
leave me be
let me hold you
let me touch your face
let me be yours
let me love you

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

1 posted 2004-10-17 09:44 AM

You tell it, Sister sil!
Stab that heart and hope to kill!
If he (or she) can't feel the pain,
Then there never really was anything to gain!

I hate "you", too...
Thinking of who that "you" is for me...
And feeling it for that "you" for you...

I love your honesty! Great poem!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-10-18 02:02 AM

I'm so fricking lost these days. I need to know what's up with you, please after labour weekend may my eyes grace your face again? We need to talk, big time. Ring me or something. Sigh. Pink Smokers. EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, don't mix pink smokers with coke, yuck! Jeez love, powerful poem you got yourself here. Loved it pure and simple, heart and soul. Hate though, those "YOU" people. Cringe, I can relate this to my life sooo easily.

Luv you forever girl.

Hollow.
Courtney.

(p.s. check out my website lol, I was inspired by Paby. http://www.geocities.com/hollow_emptiness/Hollow.html?1097814548156 )

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-10-18 02:55 AM

yeah wow
powerful

really good poem, felt the anger and hate
but I too am totally confused...... your poems seem to be baout a certain someone and I'd like to know who. txt or email or call me sugar

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-10-18 07:17 PM

Good God, the duality is amazing here
the ending sums it right up
nice writing

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2004-10-22 09:18 AM

WOW.......Just..WOW

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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