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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
All you see on the outside Is a lie A mask I wear So you wont know You may think it Beuatiful But deep inside I'm ugly All these scars All these brusies All these broken bones Deformed And alone All they see on the outside Is an act Something I put on for show You may think though That everythings all right But deep inside I've gone insane Turned against myself Turned my anger Into pain All these scars All these brusies All these broken bones Deformed And alone All they see on the outside Is a girl Who has not sined You may belive that But it's a lie I have bled I have shed I have fed And gone to bed All the scars All the brusies All the broken bones Deformed And alone You might think I'm beuatiful But you don't know the truth You don't know what I've done You don't know what I've become I'm ugly As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
You are not what you do. It's separate. You are a person and each one is precious and beautiful - Your body and emotions may be broken - but they can heal. And anything you've done can be forgiven... |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
Copperbell....i don't know what to say to your reply. when i was writing it at first i thought i was talking about how because i don't feel pretty on the inside i must not be outside. but now that i've reread it. i'm beginning to wounder if thats what it was about. and i know that inner scars could heal in time. and so could inner breaks. but changeing the way i treat myself will be much harder. i guess what i'm saying is thanks for the encourgement. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I'm glad to hear you say that. And you're welcome for the encouragement |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
great poem. give it time. hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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