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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-10-10 01:32 AM

They flow from my pen
with grim intentions
a torrid of demons
storming heaven

Broken vessels
still longing
to be filled

I color them in
shades of denial
for heaven is
everywhere you smile

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-10 01:41 AM

Oh god, this is such good poetry. I love it! Great, great, great! Nice flow and imagery and everything. This poem had everything.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2004-10-10 02:55 AM

a light in the dark!

loveliness, pure loveliness!

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

3 posted 2004-10-10 09:25 AM

Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!
And if you follow the beginning
& ending edges...
It forms a tribute to the great writer!
~ K ~
If it was intentional - awesome again!
If not, how awesome the irony!
Loved it!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

4 posted 2004-10-10 07:33 PM

Everyone else has said it best.
Beautiful.

Carrigan

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-10-10 11:59 PM

Enjoyed reading this...awesome job.
Keep Posting!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

6 posted 2004-10-11 10:08 AM

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-10-11 10:09 AM

monochromatic
fluttering
of heaven's wings
beating silence
blued
bruised
quietly suffering
from empty
offerings
longing
to fill you

to feel you

you are god
upon my tongue

everywhere
I smile

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2004-10-11 07:01 PM

what a beautiful display of talent . . .

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

9 posted 2004-10-11 11:48 PM

phenominal.
sheer...
amazement.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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