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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Darling child Little girl Take the doses of artificial prayer Lively living death of lust Demented mind Dirty deeds A wasted whore drugs infest She never sees, never learns The same always and forever Her lower lip is raw and used Laugh and play just a joke Laugh her entire life away Intense insane Perception fade A chance at last, finally Ruined life, pitiful Tap tap tap Realize squeeze All in all she goes this way Maybe one day she'll understand Ignorance a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Understanding ignorance. Interesting. You might have meant foul, instead of fowl. "artificial prayer," I loved that part. Nicely done, it was very graphic. ~Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I still have confusion with my spelling. Ill designate a dictionary and put it to use. lol Actually the poem is about my sister, kinda sad. Thanx. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Actually I did just look it up and I guess Im a feather face. oops! lol. It was supposed to have been foul. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
sad how some people nver learn, but good write greeny i did enjoy this! "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
"Intense insane Perception fade" Whoaw *couldn't decide whether to say whoa or wow* This piece was so raw, it had me on edge, and at the same time, it was very well composed! I loved it, from the very top to the very bottom.  *add*~Alicia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Maybe one day she'll understand Ignorance " If she lives that long that will be a very rough day. Sorry I didn't reply sooner, but this one hit so close to home I honestly didn't know what to say... ouch?  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you all. Sometimes people just cant stop. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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