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Dark Poetry #4

midnight bends the leaves

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-10-09 08:14 PM

I'll give her a gentle kiss
When I think the fog has assembled
When my mind's finally dissembled
A thousand pieces of chaotic melancholy
Like the quiet sifting of the maples
Repeating and renewing
Elain I see you
Mom and dad I see you
But I'd rather not say a word
I know you're not real
midnight mirages
In my head

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-10-09 08:51 PM

Sounds like a quiet fall type of thing. Just sleep.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-10-10 01:46 AM

That left me feeling empty and sad. Nicely worded, but it's just so sad. Made me want to cry.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-11 06:49 PM

like the quiet sifting of maples . . .

what beautiful imagery!

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