Dark Poetry #4 |
Once Upon |
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
In Once Upon, the night can never blind the mortal's eyes The dragon's breath will be a guide by lighting up the skies. The willow trees are such grand places underneath which lovers kiss And every wish written in the sands not a shooting star will miss. In Once Upon, the streets of gold lead to all of those you love the pain long gone, wisped away by winds and the breeze dances of the dove. No martyrs here, not a single tear Just the joy of reverie And the eyes of the soul with such purity of sight Have no mysts through which to see. To our demise, our mortal eyes are skewered by earth's polluted ways The lifemap posted to our heads Directs to places to shroud our gaze. But look with your soul through the misery To the possibility above the beyond. To a place more beautiful, you see Yes, you see... In Once Upon Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That was beautiful. I don't think there is anything else to say. That was beautiful. -GIS *read my signature. add He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Ok, that's it, I'm adding all your poems. =) this is really cooool! your making me jelous now, why didn't I come up with this? bleh, well anywho, Rock on Mr. C. Chantz ...your Chantz are groovy trance. (lol, sorry, I couldn't resist) - River "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Bloody hell, Purity, this was amazing. Once upon a time. Nice work, creative. Hollow. Courts. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
it's so d*m* beautiful, it's sad. i never thought of "once upon" as a place, but will you take me there again. we dont have to stay long. i'm gonna haveta quit. cant touch this, but know it was amazing. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"the pain long gone, wisped away by winds and the breeze dances of the dove." Oh weaver of words! But can I get there from here? Beautiful, Carrigan. Thank you! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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