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El Diablo Profundamente
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El Diablo Profundamente |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Candle burning shards of my sane and in lullabied rain I follow a thought - a trail of timeless dream Tall breath stealing white robed being thrilling, tells me what's coming just as it happened to the pixie duck only I wasn't scrooging Idley laying, waiting staring into statue eyes sudden stone presence shadowy cold essence paralize blind afraid "Who are you?" an answer chilling corrupting "Born of Elijah" the one who heard whispers and flew with fire Quit the eskimo job I never had snowy bitter pictures land philisophical rants in my hand Decieving confusion holds my eyes shut "I command you to flee and never return!" Laughter Anger shaking defiance of pridefull scum... "In the name of the king!" quaking pounding shadowy torents of silence. "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This is good. I saw it had a little number zero by it so I figured I should check it out and be the first to respond. Es co lamenta esclurande elcampick laesskoro strangorie el limpicoro lamentora scallesk amorasca sham picahorrey. If you try to read that roll the r's. I like it. -GIS [This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (09-29-2004 12:03 AM).] |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
...because in the end He still says "Puedo esperar por siempre si tu dices que estaras alli, tambien!"... (I can wait forever if you say you'll be there, too)... Another just fantastic poem, River, and a true example of the stewardship of utilizing the talents given to you! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I was originally intrigued by the title. And the poem just blew me away Really really REALLY good write You got so much talent! love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice. Yes, the title got me as well |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Since I'm only a few weeks into my elementary spanish class It took me a few minutes to realise that Green is on some kind of spanish crack that I want, and Purity was saying something nice and I'm hoping the perenthasies indicates translation. =) rrrrrrrrrrrrr. SI. Gracias ustedes amigos. RRRiver. "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Don't know why I haven't replied yet. Lullabied rain, I like how that sounds, Nice work, as always. Title was indeed an eye-catcher. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You want crack. lol. I wasn't speaking in spanish, it was tongues. Even I don't know what it means. Chiclharra lamoskadro sey le olamess skinorra. Try that one. hehe. GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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