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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
If in blooming I return To what I was once before Then can I open death's door? And beg it kill me once more? "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
What scares me about this one is that the poem that I just put up for all to see was about how my only existing brother is going through his own suicidal hell. I've already lost one brother and I've got one left. This poem, however beautifully verbose, scares me... It's almost as if it is a requiem for making death and "re-birth" a symbolically poetic theme... Gotta think about this one... (BUT it is a greatly written poem) Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
great poem. i loved it. scared me, like Purity said, but a really good poem. love and empathy darkness  nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
poignant and precise. enough said. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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