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Dark Poetry #4

Soul Left Standing

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2004-09-17 01:29 AM

Signs of truth shine through my eyes,
Yet lies and guilt corrupt the soul.
Lost the power, can no longer hide,
Ran away from an unforgiving failure.

Holding on to a memory that never existed,
A moment I thought I could control.
Watch my smile disappear, laughter fade away,
And let my stare burn through you.

Surrendered to the reality of destruction,
Used too much pain on too much pleasure.
Gave up trust for a little understanding.
All that's left is a memory I thought I had.

Honesty was my enemy
Burning my moment to useless ashes.
I suffer from the remains,
And my soul left standing.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

DarkDreamer
Junior Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 19
nowhere,special

1 posted 2004-09-17 09:49 PM

omg! that actually hurts my soul to read! that is beautiful. When i read that i thought my heart was gonna spill! wow. please keep writing! i look forward to your next post man.

-DarkDreamer

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2004-09-18 06:38 AM

beautiful....... just beautiful....
im completely speechless this was so beautiful.....
keep the writin comin....
loved it
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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