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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hi I'm in the area today and.... Stop this secrets of psychology Secret death in the dark Losing my sanity Life in serenity We got the stink Feel her touch and morbid love of lust Do it for the boss Apathetic sore and the meat rubbed raw down to the bone It hurts to hear her love Its a tangle in my scrying heart Feel this deep hurt Its so beautiful tantalizing her prey and host of secrets Found the new mortals The skulless revealings of inner choice Mounted with stones of promise signature For all the most Twisted wickedness secrets of the ghost Fantal desire The end will bring me higher Dust of the earth and charasmatic glow for what And I missed it again Spiritss ssss ss He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
that was probably the most amazing piece I have read by you. I loved how you started it off. Your freaking genius, I think. Take care ~Lex |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig? you make a fine writer of fantasy. Have you submitted anything to any mags? Search out some fantasy magazines, short stories and prose . . . This reeks of, well, ok this is what I saw: I saw a woman completely and disgustingly giving her entire self to someone of a higher plane than herself, someone evil. (yes, I am insane) I love this . . . |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Craig, three words ok? I love this and I love you. ok that was more than three. the first was serious and the second was but not in the way you probably think at first and I'm rambling so I will leave it at that but I really agreewithlittlewingshemakesagoodpoint,youshouldsubmitthistoamagazine!!!-later,Bon |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow, thanx. Thank you. You really think I'm that good? I just started this new job and personally I think my poetry is starting to sound a little more ghetto. lol. How do you do that with the magazine and all? What just pick one up and look at the publisher address or something? Oh and by telling me you love me, don't be sorry or feel like you've done anything wrong. I love you too. And you too littlewing. And you too Lexy. Thanx again. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I think you find ones that publish poetry and find instructions for the mailing address, usually they have you put "attention, poetry submission" or something like that somewhere on the envelope. but anywho, your welcome & thanks! =) - Bon again. Running out of pain |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig: nice to see such a positive attitude . . . look here: http://www.rofmagazine.com/ http://dir.yahoo.com/Arts/Humanities/Literature/Genres/Science_Fiction_and_Fantas y/Magazines/ go to the submit work link on the site or the contact us . . . the first one is a great fantasy mag and the second are a ton of mags . . . if you need help submitting - just do a google search on: How to submit a story to a publisher? Or something like that . . . Yes, you are that good . . . yw and yes! Any mag you like will have submission info after the story or in the beginning of the mag. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you for the urls littlewing. I just finished submitting "Completed Course". Thanx again. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
your welcome - good luck! |
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