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Dark Poetry #4

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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2004-09-09 04:21 PM

To breath,the air of excitement so near,
tasting the sweetness of delight on the tongue,
smelling the pungent aroma ,
holding tightly to the rushed adrenaline,
flowing ever so gently, as if it were a kitten purring.
Hearing, echoes of voices taunting giving direction,as to which way to turn.
Control, given over, to ease the bandaged cut,
I linger for the softest sound,
To show me where to hide.
No longer will the willows cover me,in this
maze of confusion,for they know the real me.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (09-09-2004 10:01 PM).]

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-09-09 05:27 PM

This was different. definelty interestin, but it was hard to read. Maybe next time put it in format.

Otherwise, awesome write.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2004-09-09 10:05 PM

changed wording, hopely easier to understand, sometimes my fingers get ahead of me. thx for reply.

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