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Greedy |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China 
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Torrid affairs ripping the world into faded shreds Weary eyes tracing the outskirts of time Years encapsulated in darkening bags Life a distant thought as toxins pour into the mind Pop a purple or a white shot of happiness Taking your life into your own hands each time Wallowing in self pity Contemplating all that has past by your eyes Dropping down to bend knee Hands clasped together wondering where the line was drawn Life dripping steadily from open deformities Fear of what is unknown hardens the heart Wrapping green paper around your wounds Believing that the dead faces will get you through it all Never sure yet willing to tempt fate Life one destination a black bag of fortress caliber Unbreakable is the end result of being Worrying about something far beyond control Shameful is existence When the only concentration is oneself In this world of the many. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this. Hope to read more of work. :-) |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, impressive. I liked it, sort of had a significance for me today. Welcome, btw. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow, I really like this poem, poe...  I can't wait to read more of your work!! Also, welcome to Passions...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Hey..i really like this. IT was different, and that is always good. Cant wait to hear more of you. Oh, and welcome to passions. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Thank you Froggy. Thank you very much hollow it shocks me to hear the word impressive, but thank you just the same. Thank you Alli. Thank you Karissa, I am glad that you thought it was different. That always makes me smile. And thank you all for welcoming me. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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