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Beautifully Scarred
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
He's been there so many times before, never faltering the consequences. The paings of bruises still marking life on wings awaiting another failed attempt to fly. The door now placed before his sights again, can he assume the distantly familiar respite of this microcosm will recognize? remember? rekindle? Never has an angel felt so vulnerable, yet never likewise so wanting... To be free again, amidst the truest of valors, He dares open dark's door once more, So much to share since shining through last. He's always known; The tribunal of the wise share his wanderings, Share his wonderings for better or for worse. For in the company of the beautifully scarred, the door never shuts completely... And the cracks imprinted in the grain of wood share a common message to the continually wounded... Where the wings aloft have failed you unto here, the power of our souls in sharing will grant you the flight you deserve... Enter |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord Purity, I have been waiting for mine forever . . . The paings of bruises still marking life on wings awaiting another failed attempt to fly. nicely done, space your thoughts I love this . . . |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow.... I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Thank you, both, very much. I have been away for over a year, but this forum always provided me inspiration and solace. This one was written for you... You are the Tribunal. The Door is the access afforded to the Dark Poetry forum. The angel? Could be me, could be any one of you. The message is the acceptance and welcome feeling always given by the members posting on this board. This poem is my praise to you all. You'll never know how much this site has meant to my life, personally and as a writer. I humbly bow and exuberantly applaud you all! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
An AMAZING poem, and an awesome message. I love the wording here, Purity, and the complimentary nature hidden in the dark of the story. Good one here! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So, there you are! Wondering whatever happened to you...Happy to see you back...happier still, to see this small wonder. Ed |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting way of describing a shared affliction and the communal overcoming of that problem. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this still needs to be seen . . . |
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