Dark Poetry #4 |
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Schizophrenia |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Have you ever felt like someone was watching you? Thought of how you knew? It's the instinct we're born with that tells us when to run, that screams that something is strangely, deeply, Wrong. But wires got crossed, the On switch is stuck, and that instinct runs rampant over logic. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
how true this is. i have found though that if you turn the whole system off you tend to be oblivious. not good when there is really trouble but it dose calm you down queit efectively. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
o wow...i like this a lot. It is so true. I have read a lot of ur poems, and athough i may not have posted on all of them, they were really good, just like this one. You are a very talented writer. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
a writer like you comes along very rarely. i loved it. you can write down what is on everyones minds, and how simple it may or may not be. Just for that reason your poems are amazing. and because they are so real absolutely amazing. wow "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
*blins* Wow... Thanks guys. I didn't know I was so loved. ^_^ Of course, my poems will be coming less frequently now, seeing as how I got told to stop flooding the forum. >.< |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
yep. you said it. very nice. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Thank you muchly K. |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Now there's other's who are dominating the boards. I admit, it was a bit off putting reading a a few new ones every day by you. And that's why I didn't reply to all. But I love them, nonetheless, I will never stop reading them, even if I don't reply. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, you've captured it - well said. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Yeah, sorry about that. This is the only vent sessions I ever get, so I tend to get a little out of hand. I'm trying to curb that, though. |
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