Dark Poetry #4 |
Ashes of a Fortress |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe its strength slip into maddness Or the roar of the fire in my heart It just breaks concentration of my mind Like a shift in general feel or a break in comfort Broken hopes in their eyes And a scattered mind to cope Off the edge and slowly fall Like staring through a straw, for miles and miles The stupid angel tries to take me away Fast random comprehension Depression not a chance Defeat almost certain But what about faith? I watch the others die in their own pace Sleep and sweet dreams to these that disbelieve. No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Off the edge and slowly fall Like staring through a straw, for miles and miles What a description! I can feel this... As for faith? I believe it works, but it does it very subtly, when we're not looking! Enjoyed your write, miscellanea |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx. |
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