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GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-12-12 02:32 PM

Walking gravel roads
And unpaved highways
Shrugging your shoulders
Like yesterday.
Things don’t seem to go
The way they should.

You’ve given up on giving in,
It always breaks your heart again.

I watch the tears roll away,
Wish that I could comfort you, today.
And be the one,
Who’d never let you down…

You’ve given up,
I’m giving in…
Only want your heart
To be loved
Once again.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

[This message has been edited by GG (12-12-2003 04:08 PM).]

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-12-12 02:57 PM

This feels sad, or is it just me.....
Enjoyed this write

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-12-12 08:37 PM

The thoughts we make to please the other person in a partnership, shouldnt be allowed to tell taht you give up you for to see if it can be saved.
Sometimes its easier to star from new inside, and begin to live gain.

Smile i liked it, cause it tells alot of your emotions.

Jes

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-12-12 09:20 PM

Ada,
sad.. yes, if I write it then most likely

thank you...

Jes,
but then, to love is to give up yourself. In a partnership you let them hold your heart, and you hold theirs ever so tenderly. With this write though, its just about a friend that I so desperately want to have the love he deserves. I wrote it as if I could give it to him... but I never could, since both of us only see eachother as friends and anything else just wouldn't be right... just wish I could help him. Whew I'm so longwinded lately. Thank you for your reply

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2003-12-12 09:47 PM

such a gentle and touching write!
this is simply, beautiful...
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-12-13 12:51 PM

Love is giving. Sometimes we give in ways our loved one realizes, and sometimes it is best that they never know. But we give.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-12-13 04:13 AM

Alyssa, you are beautiful

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-12-13 10:04 AM

GG...A very tender hearted poem for your friend.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-12-13 08:12 PM

GG - tender write from one with a tender heart...

BC

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2003-12-14 02:45 PM

Amy,
Thank you so much

you take care, too.

Ed,
amen to that... I don't think many see that anymore. They only want to take... I just wish I could give him what he needs. Thank you

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2003-12-14 02:47 PM

Dix,
You are.

Martie,
thank you, I'll never actually give it to him. But I needed to write it.

Bill,
You're so sweet

thank you kind sir.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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