Open Poetry #30 |
Twilight of Tones |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Twilight in all of her tones spoke to me Great lessons making peace Moderately working with midday Limbs propelling against any weight I stood in the tall grass at field’s edge Requireing pure power, paceing in my head The road decides colors of spice and sugar Angles combined may twist in the water Dogwood blossoms grow in bright contrasts Working withered foliage, brushing together New expressions firm my cheekbones In times when I go totally without thought I suppose a shawl of contentement Turning my attention and bringing it home Lest flames like volcanic ruptures, speak in low voice Calling softly never tired of watching and learning our choice The years are an honored progression, a comrade in disguise Forms aimed toward the sound of any movement in our minds Natural learning, pronounced in the ways of lose Powerfully like directions playing tug of war Remembering compositions floating with the breeze Where nameless creatures begin to focus thoughts and read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Twilight in all of her tones spoke to me ~*~ To have the ability, whether acquired or gifted at birth, to see and hear beyond the normal, is more than anyone can ask for... it is where we learn that we are not alone. Enjoyed this, Lee. Thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"Dogwood blossoms grow in bright contrasts Working withered foliage, brushing together New expressions firm my cheekbones In times when I go totally without thought I suppose a shawl of contentement Turning my attention and bringing it home" So many wonderful lines, but this...spoke volumes to me. Thank you. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I hate the long ones...but this was worth the read thanks Lee |
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