Open Poetry #30 |
Your Gone |
branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
You've left this world, You've thought your time was done, Little did you know how much you were loved. I am in confusion, I am in pain, No matter how long its been, I'll never forget how you fell to the pain. Things in this world can never be fixed, The death of a father is one of those, A loss of a bestfriend is another. It's so hard for me, Who is there now, In my sorrow and fear. Nothing can replace, No one ever will, You will forever have a place in this heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a sad write.. If this is recent..I am so sorry for your loss. Heart hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
branden- this is such a heartfelt and touching write...if you lost your father, i'm very sorry...i lost my mom about nine years ago and the pain of losing a parent is something one never truly gets over... but time helps to heal a little. take care, and happy holidays. I look forward to seeing more from you. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very sad branden--I'm really sorry to hear of your loss--and if this isn't about you personally, you managed to hit right on the target. Good to see you back here again! ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
Beautifully written. You capture the swirl of conflicting emotions very well. Having lost one of my bestfriends to suicide and another to heart complications I can empathize completely. The only thing that I can offer is that as time goes on you'll remember the good times more and more, the haunting images and thoughts will start to wane. ~Ryan |
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