Open Poetry #30 |
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Who am i -----> Or who am i not ! ( nearby drunk ) |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Am i here or am i there ----> Please save for mee a prayr. I dont know how to spell ----> But please dont tell. im a friend of hearts ----> And still my words are of arts. But who am i that i want to live ----> So please why cant no one ever forgive. I am mee ----> Is taht what you all see. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ----> But were can i goooo. Someone come and catch mee ----> I want to pass and go the way i feel free. But still i have a life ----> God why am i still alive. I love the hearts ----> for all it becomes arts. But were am I ----> My life could be such a sighhhhh. This was one of my bad days but wery thoughtfull, and i have to say the dreams i had behind told another story that what i have smile. The fairy tale and the end ----> hehhehehe that one we cant bend. Smile or tears falling dont know ----> but were tell life me to go. Jes [This message has been edited by Jes (11-24-2003 01:39 PM).] |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Intresting form |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Thanks Brad Majors Jes |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Interesting poem. Don't worry I don't spell to great at times. I mix up my to too's and my know no's, my then and than even when I say them I'm not sure. Dah..... Keep on sharing. Se Ya Bon-Bon ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmm, well, let me tell you, not only don't I know how to spell, can't type either, and don't ask me what I had for lunch, cause unless I write it down, I'll never remember...enjoyed this, keep em coming. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Interesting poem. But I still liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Thanks all and yes i will let them run. Smile Jes |
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