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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-12-11 11:17 AM

I want to find
Salvation in your arms
But keep falling
On the way there
In your 'saliva.'

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2003-12-11 04:44 PM

Whoa, very intense, but I enjoyed it.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-12-11 09:47 PM

Yes! Short and .... not sweet.... short and something or other......ah, good. Yes, that's the word.

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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-12-12 01:44 AM

Thank you both! I was a little hesitant about posting...so thank you for the reassurance

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

4 posted 2003-12-12 07:16 AM

These words leave a lot for the reader's imagnination, although those words are not many.

enjoyed!

"If this grand panorama before me is what you call God...then God is not dead."

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-12-12 11:55 AM

this is an amazing piece

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-12-12 12:39 PM

Opeth-

Sometimes it's better when it's not all laid out right in front of you, and can interpret it any way you want, but also strive to see what the author's speaking about. Thanks for the read and comment!

Brad-

THANK YOU!!! I'm flattered

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

7 posted 2003-12-12 03:32 PM

Nicely done, KOKO.......did I tell you I used to work at a radio station
with the same call letters? I did.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

8 posted 2003-12-13 12:29 PM

dingusjr--

LOL funky

Thanks for the read and comment!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2003-12-13 01:26 AM

i'm a big fan of poems with few words.. when they can make a big impact...

this did just that.
well done.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

10 posted 2003-12-13 10:11 AM

How often is this the case? What happened to romance? Amazing my dear! Luv ya!

[This message has been edited by Edder (12-14-2003 12:11 AM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2003-12-14 02:16 AM

This really made me chuckle -- 'cuz I've been there!! Hope you find your salivation -- opps, salvation! Thanks for the poem, I really did enjoy it.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2003-12-14 02:11 PM

Excellent!!

Eric

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