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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Adrift Winters have grown colder now the branches are more bare the winds in gusty bitter voice have nothing new to share It’s true, I know, the cycling but I had not expected this since she left without departing we can only stand adrift © 121003 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
we can only stand adrift, i can feel the coldness as winter is sadly here |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
My goodness this is sad... you convey the feeling very vividly with the imagery you use. Great write, and I hope things warm for you soon. Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this leaves me reaching for something so close but that can never quite be reached.. cold and alone. beautiful, though. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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