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Emotions |
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Serena Renae Junior Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 48Ohio, USA |
Emotions in life are as the changes in wind, Gentle breeze or strong gusts begin and then end. Fallen leaves carried upward just to fall yet again, From trees that may break but more often just bend. Such are the emotions of life's ups and downs, Breath-taking journey leading from the sky to the ground. Emotions that grab us and twirl us wildly around, Then let go of us suddenly, not knowing where we are bound. Yet if we contain the emotions, our true self we will hide, To shield the world from our feelings by keeping them inside. But if we show our emotions and can in others confide, The emotional freedom will open our heart ever so wide. By letting out the emotions that describe who we are, We take the first step to heal any emotional scar. Our family and friends begin to seem not so far, We join our hands and our hearts and we reach for the stars. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful. The cycle is perfect. Enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
By letting out the emotions that describe who we are, We take the first step to heal any emotional scar. Our family and friends begin to seem not so far, We join our hands and our hearts and we reach for the stars. very lovely thoughts, very well written. Welcome to passions. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautifully penned Serena. Very much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
By letting out the emotions that describe who we are, We take the first step to heal any emotional scar. Our family and friends begin to seem not so far, We join our hands and our hearts and we reach for the stars. Serena, this is oh so true! I wish you Happy Holidays,  Ethel |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
You touched on it perfectly Serena, although I guess we all react differently to our felt emotions. Men, women, children, adults... I really liked it. Well put together and written. Tony.  |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
perfect joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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