Open Poetry #30 |
Most Intimate Wishes |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Could I spill the stars to shower gems upon you Turn the ocean tides to carry you along Bring the heavens to you with your morning coffee Tempt the whispers of the woods to play you song There would be no greater joy that could fulfill me In the effort it may take to make secure A foundation for your passage on this journey To make blessed in this life as dreams endure For I see in you such qualities worth measure The most sensual of sculpture acquiesced For the form a simple shell concealing treasure Far beyond imagined wealth of human best In your heart resides a fire ever burning And I see with such delighted eyes the thrill The undoubted wonderment divines discerning In His image such an art of way and will Could I give enough to warm you through the darkness Orchestrate the sun to shine for you each day It would pale within the light you shine about me Whether you are here with me or far away Could I find the simple pleasures to astound you Bring you happiness that shelters any rain I would give my life for love to but surround you Giving up all silly note or jealous claim You belong unto the wilderness beyond me And in accolades I see you off each flight For I know that we reside within each other And I know by heart the curves and vales right So in keeping with a theme that is the basis Of the things that matter most to me for sure Could I put in capsule joy in certain stasis Certainly this love to thrive inside so pure Copyright Kkh 12/10/03 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just heavenly and devine and if to keep such beauty as a treasure that doesnt tarnish with time, if only inside, would be sweet |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
enjoyed the read here inked... i figured i would return the feedback because you managed to read one of my pieces... this was definately worth the read...... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This was a pleasure to read. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Serena Renae Junior Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 48Ohio, USA |
I enjoyed this poem. It held my attention. Some longer ones tend to lose the interest of the reader, this one didnt at all. Good writing. Love, Serena |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
quote: Awesome, Awesome line... I wish I would have thought of that one This is definatly worth the read, and Im gonna look up some of your other pieces. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh...this is quite touching...straight from the heart...and a beautiful heart it is |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
*exquisite* poetry, Kathleen~ A rare gem cannot even compare!! Happy Holidays and many blessings to you in the New Year. |
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