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Open Poetry #30

Fall.. to stand up again

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-12-10 04:03 PM

I wonder when we took that turn
that time when magic went to dark
a twist somewhere when love did burn
but seemed to always left its mark

Warmth and cold walk hand in hand
Linger on our life ahead

Our up and downs, the mounts we climb
The overwhelming ... small I feel
Naieve I wish I was still blind
but realise this is for real

Questions remain between two breaths
Answers none can understand

As long as strength and love remains
to seal our bond throughout our quest
we'll keep on mending every stain
'till both our hearts are beaten, crashed...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-10 07:51 PM

well done, Zenny! good to see you here again, m'friend.
Love's pathway isn't always easy, is it? Sometimes you have to fall and get back up again several times in a row.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

2 posted 2003-12-10 08:04 PM

This gave me the feeling of walking on a beach in cold weather, but bundled in a jacket, with the surf hitting the rocks so hard that I could hear nothing else but the words you've written. Nicely done, this.

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

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