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Temptation |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Smoke a cigerette Brush the hair from your face Find another meaning Erase away the trace Salty, teary lips And tiny flakes of ash Red wine dribbling down Go take out the trash Take another hit Brush the hair from her face Find another way There's nothing to erase. |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
deep and with a depth of meaning i enjoyed this write - you have used simplicity to relate depth i am only with praise love Titch |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
 Thank you very much titch. I appreciate it  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
With the stuff that I smoke The hair wouldn't hide I stay so stoned I'd make her my bride. Nice write KoKo....take a toke for me... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
~Smiling~ Thanks for the read and comment, Toerag ;D |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply beautiful. Eric |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
Deeply Beautiful indeed! Wow Thank you for sharing. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Eric and WBP- Thank you both very much |
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