Open Poetry #30 |
Soulmate of Dreams |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
With a poetical smile you stole my heart and now my life will never be the same. With sultry text you caress my soul through the dark and lonely night melting the sadness far away Our love is far beyond romantic definition for you are the soulmate of dreams You are the princess who holds the keys to my heart for all eternity Even if dreams are all we can ever hope to be then may we sleep forever so you can always be with me. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
With sultry text you caress my soul through the dark and lonely night and I believe my dear Brad, that is what life is all about...love, and creativity...a dream worth dreaming...going way beyond to the deepest part of our internal life...which is emortally penetrating... A vision you have painted here for all romance of God's will...truer then life itself..or what "we" as mortals have the ability to bestow. Wonderful write! Good morning! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully written Brad , soulmate dreams , yes I can relate to those Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad, Very romantic. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Brad Do I ever love how you end this.......Also I love that "poetical smile" phrase......Clever arrangement and expression of words. Eric |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dream long, dream sweet, dream often ~ and may they manifest into soul-satisfying reality! I really enjoyed reading this poem, Brad. I particulary love to read this side to your talent. EA |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you know a man is in love when he writes words like this... and they come out pink Beautiful. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
and..if you want to see your dreams come true...don't sleep...good write |
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