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Open Poetry #30

Ruminations

Imajica
Junior Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 14
NM, USA

0 posted 2003-12-10 02:23 AM

you’re proud of your actions
but all I see is my father
and im not willing to wait for your rebirth
like my mother for his
maybe it’s the tv and video games that made me impatient
or maybe it’s the lack of any vision of future on your part
because I see much in my own future
the only problem is your absent from it
Im planning what to do after you
more than with you
but im not escaping anytime soon
because despite your faults
you can make me feel like a mountain.

"Is there a superintendent of the spaceship, Luke"
-APS Superinteddent Brad Allison

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-10 03:48 AM

now this...hit very close to home

and feeling like a mountain feels good

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2003-12-18 09:03 PM

well laid out, great write

be strong, be proud, be you

-*-*-

Cancer kills us all. I'm not immortal after all.

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