Open Poetry #30 |
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Chocolate |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR ![]() |
Chocolate Addicting though it may be, I cannot seem to get it away from me, So sweet so sweet, And very good to eat, That ravishing taste, I will never let it go to waist, Running through the halls, And jumping off the walls, Annoying all the others, I suppose that is why we all have mothers. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I have a friend who needs to read this one! THANK you for a fun read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh yes! The chocolate highs! ~ Unfortunately followed by the lows! ~ Which can swing back up to highs with another chocolate fix! If I indulged my chocolate sweet tooth as much as I would like to, it really would go to "waist"! lol Warm hugs 'n smilie faces, Earth Angel |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
chocolate!!! CANDY!!!! SUGAR!!!!!! wow, the rush that your writing about chocolate brings me. lol. great piece. makes me think of my next milky way. Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kristabell - now I have a craving, for some of that chocolate, sweet it is, yummy... BC |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Greetings, The Chocolate Monster is in the house. I can smell, taste, hear, touch and see Chocolate. My other sense is to know when someone writes about Chocolate.Chocolate cake, pies, candy,and even Chocolate Porkchops. May I come to your house for CHOCOLATE? The Chocolate Monster. ![]() |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
*opening a hershey kiss* LoL, very nice write. I had a good laugh. I like your use of "waist" pretty ingenious. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I was wondering who would get that waist thing. lol! Good job. Thanks, I could use some chocolate right about now too!!! |
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