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The Hunter
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The Hunter |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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He hunts for the love Of just one woman He hunts for years Until the right one comes He thought the right one had come And then she was taken away Then he started hunting again Without getting over the one He thought was right for him He hunted for years And found a woman Just like the one he lost Little did he know That 2 years in to the relationship With the new woman His past would come to haunt him Now he loves 2 women The one from the past And the one in the presant And he can't chose Which one is gonna lose Now the hunter has turned Into the hunted Because of what had happened in the past As come back to haunt him Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Unfortunately, they will all lose their hearts to much pain from the selfishness of this. I wouldn't/couldn't tollerate a man with so little respect for himself...to string two woman along is not love...sorry, but I've been involved in relationships as such and it causes me to be very candid...there is nothing to gain here and nothing which will compliment anyone... Thank you for writing and sharing...and again, no insult intended, but a very touchy subject with me...as I loath infidelity, to oneself is bad enough, but to others is irresponsible and self absorbed. Good write and thanks for sharing. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Warriors always get a bad rap for such things. But it seems nobody's willing to find out the whole story before passing judgement, thus they too hunt the warrior. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh my... that is awesome how you wrote about that!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Now isn't that an interesting perspective? Sadelite |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Tsk... a sad tale, and a theme with oh so many variations.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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