Ericc
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2003-12-09
11:40 AM
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The air is crisp and sharp to the breath.
I brace myself to the thousand cuts of another day.
Mornings always hold such promise to the quiet hours of our separation.
And yet even as I stand alone...you are not absent.
You are the grace that cuts the deepest.
I draw you through on the curve of my breath.
And like a blade you slice with your departure.
I bleed...like this...for hours.
Until the day is spent in the blood of goodbye.
And night falls with sudden ease.
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2003-12-09
11:44 AM
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your writing is beyond description Eric. Just amazing..it always leaves me speechless. Hugs~~ Let peace begin with me...
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2003-12-09
12:07 PM
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I know the feeling
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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
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2003-12-09
12:16 PM
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ah yeah... I know. Man.. well said.
Always, AlyssaHe was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears.
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
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2003-12-09
12:23 PM
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Eric, I know thisd feeling every time that my Love and I have to be apart again. You wrote it very well. Are you apart from your Love? Just wondering, since you write of it so well. Hugs to you Ethel
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Ericc
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2003-12-09
12:47 PM
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Hi Ethel,
I am never apart from my love. And yet sometimes it can feel this way...even when you stand mere inches away.
It is this way with Spirit. We stand in midst of it...and yet cry out in lonliness.
As Rumi says - "The grief you cry out from draws you towards union."
The pain that cuts is merely a prayer to heal anything that feels like separation.
We can never stand apart from our love...we are that which we hold closest. We are that...and we are more.
Thanks for asking Ethel!
Love, Eric
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
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2003-12-09
01:05 PM
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Ericc Well done, enjoyed the read.
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