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Who's the Liar
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Who's the Liar |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I’m not normal… We can talk Cliché conversation ‘Til I settle Six feet down. But I will still be different… And you’ll still be the same. It’s funny, Ironic I was who you bragged about And then I needed you… Now You start the lies And say that is what I do. He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You write with great insight and clarity. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GG Good ouch. |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
sounds cliche, hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaa |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It appears to me that you are both at cross purposes. Keeping things simple, honest and out in the open works for me. I have a feeling that that is how you operate as well. Here's to a life of KISSing! Keeping it Simple, Sweetheart!  ~ and remember, Dear Alyssa, being different makes one unique and extra special! Lovin' hugs, Sweetheart! EA |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I love how your writing packs a huge punch into a few words. Your brief, concise style is refreshing. Not everyone can do it and you do it well. Great write. You go into my library  Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, yea.. you got it Eric, thank you glad you think so...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sey, thanks, and.. yep! Duncan, lol ..yes. Thanks Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Linda, the story in a nutshell is I was always considered the perfect daughter, never been grounded, straight A, perfect attendance, good attitude... so he bragged about me. Then my health got bad and I spend most of my time in bed, and since doctors can't come up with whats wrong he's decided I must be lying and now threatens to send me off to a boarding school. And he's the only one I live with and the closest to caring at all in my family. Ah yea that was good to get out, sorry about the rant there. But yes, I like to keep it simple... and honest. To KISSing! thanksAlways, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
icequeen, wow, what a compliment, I'm truly honored! Its short if I'm angry and long if I'm depressed generally lol thank you much Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, now I have a better understanding of where you were coming from with this. I'm sorry that you have not been in the best of health. It must be so frustrating to not know what is causing your symptoms. At least then, there can be a plan of action to get well again. Have the doctors ruled out fibromyalgia? Actually, that is difficult to diagnose but it can really wreak havoc in one's life. It seems that you have a lot to deal with in your life at the present time. I pray that both your physical and emotional health improve. Your writing ability is abundantly healthy, Dear One, and in fine working order! Loving, healing, comforting hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Allysa, I'm sorry that you are having such emotional pain in your life. It's bad enough to have physical pain, but when the other is added to it, the physical gets worse. My orthopedic doctor told me that a long time ago. I sincerely hope and pray that all gets better with you very soon, little friend. You are just such a good person, things have to get better.  Hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Dearest GG, Hang in there and I am praying for you and your health. The body can be a strange machine. You are loved so keep up the faith and keep writing and keeping poetry alive! pictureme :-) |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Linda, yea, its frustrating not to know, and I imagine its terribly frustrating for my father, so I do need to give him that credit. And no, they haven't really ruled out fibromyalgia, but in what we've looked at it doesnt seem to be... Thank you for the compassion and compliments... God bless you Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ethel, yep your doctor was very right. It can be difficult to try to seperate the two as in the body all things connect. Then again, there is also a spiritual side connected. I don't know what things my family has allowed to haunt us in the past, but I know God makes it clear that demons are still very active and though they can't enter a believer, they can torment one if allowed to. Err sorry, just been on my mind today, so I'm talking lots. Thank you much for your care and sincerity  I'm learning that being good usually means life is harder... Take care.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
pictureme, very right its a strange machine indeed. Thanks loads for your prayers as God is the only one who can help in the end. I'll work on keeping up the faith, and you, too. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Alyssa, Ericc stated your writing very nicely. "You write with great insight and clarity". I couldn't have said it any better. Nice poetry. poe If nothing is something |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Poe, you all here do honor me so much thank you for the compliment, I do indeed thank you much.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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