Open Poetry #30 |
Want to Share My Candycane? |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your so sweet, a Christmas treat, Red and white, a tasty delight, Peppermint flavor, cooling to savor, A Christmas tradition, eating candy confection, Hanging sweetly on my tree, so many to eat, yummy!yummy! Tasty, delicious, non-fattening,nutricious, Make my breath cool and minty, at Christmas I have plenty, Grab one and take a lick, to eating one there is a trick, Eat from the top of the cane, Go all the way down, This way your hands don't get sticky, If you don't leave the wrapper on,tricky, Candycanes are a Christmas treat, Come to my house, I have plenty to eat, I will share all of my candy with you, For sharing is the Christmasy thing to do, Merry Christmas to all, to all a goodnight, Grab some hot coccoa and eat your candycane tonight! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-09-2003 02:00 AM).] |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Hehe, that had to be one of the cutest poems Ive ever read, and the pictures just added the delightfullness of the poem Im not much for rhyme schemes, but that one just made my day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully cute and precious! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Obsecurity~Glad to have made your day~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Dixie Thanks~ for the sweet comments! |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Not a problem, I think it deserves a bump :P |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Obscurity!~ [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-09-2003 05:15 AM).] |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
And Merry Cgristmas to you to!! You have cheered me up thanks. x Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Lover lost! ~ARH |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This poem was sweet...but you do not need candy canes my love..you are already so sweet....love Golderose.xxxxxxxxxxxx ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My love if it is true that I may be sweet, than my sweetness only comes from the love of your heart.... xxxxxxxx love ~ARH |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The sweetness of the holidays...shown through the warmth of your words. Thanks. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - ok, you sold me, please send the candy cane... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Eric~ What a sweet reply~thanks~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ok Bill UPS or regular mail~LOL Sending it by Santa~ you should get it at Christmas! ~ARH |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Mmm, candy canes and hot cocoa sound so good! I love the Christmas spirit, and you have plenty of it! ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Honey, I'd share my candy cane with you anytime... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
My love...thanks for this poem written about me....When I get there, I will share your candycanes hanging on your tree and more... xxxxx love Goldenrose ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (12-10-2003 10:13 PM).] |
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Serena Renae Junior Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 48Ohio, USA |
Very cute poem..I need a candy cane now!! Love, Serena |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
Wow, I am really enjoying my first visit to this site. I have not laughed so much in a long time. Very nice write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, hehehe, sharing is always better, and may your love forever feel like Candy Land deep in your heart, yay! (does happy angel dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may the jingle bells ring delightedly in your heart this season, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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