Open Poetry #30 |
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Lonely, Cold, December |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
I vowed that I'd remember But I don't want to anymore These few days in December Have cost more than I've bargained for. Maybe it was something That I said or did Maybe more than one thing But I am just a kid A kid who had a crush And made her dream come true But gone now is that rush And also gone is you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Especially liked your first verse, and the rush of loving! Made me feel like a kid at heart, guess there is a little of that in all of us. Nice~ |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile There will be another day.... To start up in a way. You got this crush.... But never live life in a rush. Seek the heart.... That will be your proven art. So you will get back.... For just another love attack. Smile, You inspired mee here, hope it was ok. Jes
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
love can be harsh as a cold december breeze but it can be just the opposite too...nicely drawn out on both sides good job I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
PsychoticBunni - a December told, of a time ago... Nice write... BC |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
thanks for the comfort guys. you make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :excorcist: ![]() Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
decembers always are.... I like it Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
beautiful....simply beautiful! love Titch |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad, but also beautiful |
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