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Untitled with Dignity
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Untitled with Dignity |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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FOR Angel: Coldness meets the stillness, on a perceptionless December morning. The tyrant living in my heart doesn't want to part. Guilt with a painless vengeance. Diligent in a moments reticulated abuse icicles of love, stabbing through a numb heart. Puddles for free blood dripping releasing from a pain in the moonlight. something about this isn't quite right. Tell me a lie that things could possibly be okay hang the coldness in your heart bring stillness to your temper. Hanging on to nothingness, diamonds and rust, untitled with dignity, you've lost. |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
the dark depressing metaphors for pain are amazing. i loved it. it really hit close to home. Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
No lies from me. I still say pain without growth is suffering without purpose. So look for the lesson. The sooner it's learned the sooner it has purpose. Intense write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very intense and painful, Kellie....well done.  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Meg, Larry, and Sky, Thank You for the comments. I really appreciate them and you! Love, |
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