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Open Poetry #30

Of Genetic Coding

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-12-08 06:48 AM

Under watchful eyes, like praying mantis
  The spirits;The constellate
Tripping, spinning, the steadfast dream
  Amidst the boundless and cloudless main

I go wandering, powerless to quell
  Hand-mills, grinding heartache in one life
And marched past during my direst peril
  How clever of you to notice, I will not be the last

Signed against the air, moving through life
  The psychic structure of genetic coding
That was when i noticed, hard work and courage
  Just the beginning, of this immortal journey

Titch

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-08 09:23 AM

Titch, you are a very good writer.
I enjoy reading your work.
Hugs

Ethel

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

2 posted 2003-12-08 05:22 PM

wow. the entire cosmos seems suspended in your writing. the piece was very cryptic but I think i understand it. was it meant to be that way or am i just stupid??

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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