Open Poetry #30 |
Ocean's Beauty |
Serena Renae Junior Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 48Ohio, USA |
White sand sinking beneath my feet, Waves crashing to reach the shore. Sun high above to make it complete, Unique sensations felt to my core. Strolling the beach, my toes in the sea, Hearing the gulls above as they fly. Searching for seashells beneath my feet, Watching kites as they dance in the sky. Out in the ocean, I float by the tide, And all I can hear are the waves. Serenity and peace consume me inside, As the ocean's surf my body braves. The ocean's beauty is beyond compare, The scent alone is unforgettable. Constant breeze with salt in the air, An escape to paradise, unregrettable. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The ocean's beauty is beyond compare, The scent alone is unforgettable. Constant breeze with salt in the air, An escape to paradise, unregrettable. Serena, this is so beautiful. I love the water and the beach. It's so peaceful!! Thanks for sharing your poem. Hugs Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Serena, this is just sensational. You have captured the ocean and the beach with words that are filled with images. I live near the ocean and I know that smell so well. Hugs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful piece of work here Serena.. It's so cold and dark today... this took me there...to that beach and warmth of the sun. Thank you for this keeper. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
you share so elegantly of the ocean thankyou so much love Titch |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Serena - a pleasure to read this snowy morning in the North East. Makes me want to get outta here to some warmer climate... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like a perfect summer day! And yes, have no regrets, peace is where we find it! Loved this!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I've got all that only ten minutes away! beautfiul piece! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Serena.... Ohhhhh...this makes me sooooo homesick...but, thanks for taking me to the ocean for a little while. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently described Serena , being only minutes away from the ocean thats exactly where I have been today Hope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You captured the soothing qualities of the ocean so well in your write. It brought me there, and I understand so well the peace given here. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The title grabbed me, you have captured the magic of the ocean wonderfuly... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful, mysterious poem after my own heart...as to, that is how the sea calls to me....reminding me of just how very small I am, compared to the eyes of life, it wears for a smile...gathering me up, lulling in natures serenity...how deeply toned are the horizons that fall to water's top... this was dreamy, thank you for writing and sharing Happy Holidays |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SerenaRose, you took me there with this one. --- BEEEEEEEwell. |
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